Rough Cut

Strengths - Good use of Graveyard,
Good shots,
Black and White is good,
Mood is set well,
Good pace,
Very creative,
Range of shots,
Looks like an opening,
Good music,
Good close-up of graveyard.

Weakness's - Confusing,
Too many zooming in shots,
Music needs to be less bubbly

At the moment our rough cut is still incomplete and still needs alot of work!

Thanks for the positive Feedback! :)